
There is a lot of internal dialogue in the beginning of this book but even all of that didn't help me connect to the H and h. I didn't feel that these monologues added enough insight and depth. The H and h, especially the h, rarely have interactions with others so I was amazed to find that all of these other characters loved the h. How? When? I wish that we had seen the development of their affection for her. To be truthful, when the H first admits to himself that he loves the h I was surprised because I didn't feel a bond between them.
The second half of the book did pick up and I definitely thought that it was better than the first half. I felt their connection more and the H didn't come across as creepy as he did towards the beginning.